Tuesday, 21 June 2011

Second Book Reviews

Happy Book

It's time for my I'm-back-from-holiday-and-I-read-stuff tradition: mini book reviews. This time, I caught up on book twos of series where I'd read book one, but somehow never got around to reading any more. I blame the pixies.




Throne of Jade (Temeraire #2) - Naomi Novik

The second book about the dragon Temeraire, set during the Napoleonic Wars. Plus points from the first book was the unusual setting for dragons and having teams manning the dragons (rather than a single rider). In book two, Temeraire and Laurence (his rider) have to travel to China, to smooth over the diplomatic issues caused by seizing Temeraire's egg from the French. Much sea travel ensues.


The Good:

  • The Chinese dragon culture was fun. Especially the cookery for dragons.
  • It's unusual for a book about dragonriders to deal with the slavery issue of the dragons head on. Temeraire is starting to grow up and consider the issues.
  • There is some Volly! (Cows!)

The Bad:

  • I found this one a bit slow to get started.
  • Most of the characters from the other books made few (if any) appearances as they're back in England. I liked some of the new characters, but given that they live in China, they may not be seen again.
  • The China sections suffer a common problem with outsider perspectives: it's hard to get into the Chinese culture, as Laurence has little understanding of what he's seeing and doesn't make much attempt to do so. I often wished I could see this through Temeraire's eyes, as he could speak Mandarin and was actively absorbing everything around him.
  • Despite pinyin tone marks being my mortal enemy, not seeing them here threw me off (not on names so much, but other words). Maybe I'm getting used to the things. I also find it odd to see some names separated by character and some combined (though you see Englishfied names as Family Generation Personal or Family Generationpersonal, mix and matching the formats isn't so normal). I'll note I'm not an expert at Mandarin, but those were my initial reactions based on what I do know.

Overall:

I'm curious about how Temeraire's going to continue to change as he matures, but I liked it better when they weren't travelling around.




Changeless / Blameless (Parasol Protectorate #2 and #3) - Gail Carriger

The second and third book (handled together as the storylines are connected) about Alexia Tarabotti, a soulless woman living in an alternate Victorian England. The first book was a little heavy on the romance for my tastes, but I enjoyed the setup of having vampires and werewolves integrated into society, as well as the steampunk technology.


The Good:

  • For me, the steering away from romance was a good thing. There is still romance in the later books, but Changeless is more mystery oriented and Blameless is more of a thriller/suspense.
  • The secondary characters get more meat on their bones, which was particularly needed in the case of the gay characters. The first book made me wince by talking about them mincing everywhere instead of walking, and so forth... so it was good to see a bit more character depth and a little less mincing.
  • These two books improve on the handling of women characters - there are other capable women apart from Alexia (which wasn't really the case in Soulless). Alexia's sisters are also starting to get differentiated, rather than being generically insufferable.
  • Some of the strongest scenes yet were in Blameless. Both in terms of funniness and emotional impact. Though I'd note they were the scenes back in London, rather than the ones with Alexia.

The Bad:

  • Both books had periods where Alexia didn't really have someone to play off. She's paired a lot with Madame Lefoux, but the two don't really have a good chemistry (in the general sense, not necessarily the romantic sense). The banter just wasn't there. I preferred the scenes of Alexia with Maccoon, Lyall, Floote, Ivy, Akeldama... or really anyone but Madame Lefoux.
  • The main storyline with Alexia dragged in places in Blameless, which was highlighted by the stronger scenes set back in London without her.
  • The books have some unfortunate Americanisms, which are rather glaring to a UKer. It's a pity she didn't have someone from the UK to go through looking for those, because they would have been easy fixes. Ladybug... *shudder*.

The Neutral:

  • The book is omniscient, rather than limited third. I'm not picky about my viewpoints, but I know it annoys the stuffing out of some readers.
  • On a neutral-for-now note, I have concerns that are also mild spoilers. ~~highlight for vague spoiler~~ It seems to be floating towards all homosexual relationships being tragic, when that isn't the case for the heterosexual ones (which end happily ever after). The next book could turn this around, so I'm waiting to see what happens. ~~spoilery end~~

Overall:

I'm looking forward to the next book, but with some caution (as noted in my spoilery neutral comment). And no more ladybugs*, please. I wish Alexia looked more Italian on the cover, rather than an average Northern European.




Fool Moon (Dresden Files #2) - Jim Butcher

The second book following the wizard Harry Dresden, as he solves paranormal cases. I liked the mystery focus of the first book and Harry Dresden has a cat, so he's not all bad.


The Good:

  • The werewolves were interesting, as there are many different sorts, rather than trying to smoosh together all wolf-related legends into one variety.
  • In the first book, Harry hides things from Murphy to protect the womenfolk. There wasn't really a lasting consequence to this. The same isn't true here, where trying to protect women by keeping them in the dark does lead to bad consequences.

The Bad:

  • The character arc with Harry and Murphy did a repeat from the first book, with Dresden trying not to tell her anything, allegedly for her own good, and her getting annoyed with him.
  • Due to the above, and Harry not spending much time at home, his main talking partners (Bob and Murphy) don't talk to him much. I don't think the replacements worked as well. One is a little low on character and one has plenty but isn't that talkative. Harry works best when he has someone to talk to.

The Neutral:

  • It'd be unfair to criticise the book for this... but I came into the Dresden files from the TV series, where Morgan was one of my favourites. He didn't appear here. More Morgan! (I will forever think of Morgan as Conrad Coates, even though the book tells me otherwise. You can't dissuade me from this.)

Overall:

I enjoyed this one more than I expected, especially as I'd been warned it wasn't the best. It's not groundbreaking and the author does do some recycling from the first book, but it's entertaining enough. I'm hoping Murphy and Dresden will start working together more now (or at least, trying to work together).




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* I had the urge to shout "It's LADYBIRD!!!" at the book a few times.

Sunday, 19 June 2011

Second Life 8th Birthday: Natural Magic

Second Life's birthday celebrations are starting up soon (June 20th, 2011 at 10am SLT*). They've created an area with a giant cake at the centre and a number of stages. Inbetween those are little plots for Second Lifers to build exhibits on the theme "The Magic of Second Life". Given that I live in a giant mushroom garden in Second Life, magic was right up my street.

I found out about all this a few days before the deadline for applying to exhibit. I didn't have time to make something entirely new, but I thought about what I could make with what I had. I sent in a description for an exhibit called "Natural Magic", with some of my original nature photos in a magical garden setting. Then I set to work actually making the thing.

(Click the pictures for larger versions)




Early Designs

I started out building it on my own land, as I knew I'd be away for most of the official building time. That way, I could pop in on the first build day and drop a finished build. I almost made it... I only have a few finishing touches to do by the time official building opened.

Random: Garden bits on a mossy base

The Pile of Random

Taking Shape: A part-built garden

Starting to Take Shape




SL8B Sims Open

Applying doesn't mean a guaranteed place, but my work wasn't in vain. I got an email through saying I'd been accepted. The day to start building arrived (June 5th), and all the builders descended on the area. This all went pretty smoothly and the builders were mostly friendly and enthusiastic. Any that weren't were eaten by the giant tentacle monster living in the moats**. A giant hand got loose, but no one was harmed***.

My spot is on Fascinate, not far from the giant cake (which was still being built on the first building day).

First Day: Empty sim and part-made cake

First View (June 5th)

I plopped down a mostly done garden, so the building at the site was mainly tweaks here and there. The final garden is indeed a rainbow pool with giant mushrooms, but also a stump house with light up stepping stones in rainbow colours (walk on them). Originally, I'd planned to display the photos on basic stands, but I had the idea of hanging the cloud photos off the rainbow... and then thought I ought to do something better with the flower ones, hence the picture plants.

Any concerns I had about being too rainbow-coloured were gone when my neighbours moved in: the LGBT community has giant rainbow balloons, so I think we've claimed the neighbourhood for rainbows everywhere.

Finished: A mossy mushroom garden with photos on display

Natural Magic: Finished

Inside the Stump: Animal photos in a tree stump, with rainbow lighting

Inside the Stump

Picture Plant: Red tulip photo on a stalk

Picture Plant




Location

For the next couple of weeks, starting at the official opening, Natural Magic can be found on Fascinate. Come visit me:

http://slurl.com/secondlife/SL8B%20Fascinate/66/138/22

Cake: A giant floating cake, with purple sparklies and white trees around it

The Official Cake: Happy SL Birthday!




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* SLT (Second Life Time) is the same as PST (Pacific Standard Time).

** I might have made that bit up.

*** I didn't make that bit up.